小学生一分钟英文自我介绍

hello, everybody! i am glad to stand here and introduce myself. i am xxx and my english name is xxx. i am eleven years old. my birthday is on christmas day. i am a student of grade 6, class 1 of ruhe new district primary school. i like to play violin, reading, swimming, skiing and surfing the internet....i have a lot of hobbies! the color i like best is silver. my favorite food is hamburger. when i grow up, i want to be a writer because a writer can write many books which are useful to people (i don't know if this is correct or not). thank you very much for listening to me. thank you once again!

大家好！很高兴能在这里做自我介绍！我叫xxx，我的英文名字叫xxx，我今年11岁了，我的生日在圣诞节，我在汝河新区小学六年级一班念书。我喜欢拉小提琴、看书、游泳、滑雪、上网……我的爱好很广泛！我喜欢银色，我最喜欢吃汉堡包！长大后我想当一名作家，因为作家能写很多对人有益的书（不知道对不对）。谢谢你们的聆听。谢谢！

如果好的话我会追加分数，不要用什么翻译通，语言不通顺！期限为一天。大家帮忙昂！